Monday, February 28, 2011

Heartache

My heart aches when I see you, lover
It pines for the words you struggle to find
It seeks, in vain, the comfort you can't provide
The stuff you find so hard to define.


5 comments:

Arthur Dent said...

4 lines... just 4 lines! And yet you can feel the torment of a lifetime expressed in them. It made me think of the song 'Unforgiven-II' by Metallica. Good stuff!

eLmoNiv said...

Aah I love that song.. glad you like this :)

Arthur Dent said...

Didn't know you liked Metallica, at least your fb page doesn't say that about you.
I have often felt that creativity breeds creativity; any medium of expression like art, music etc. used by one can inspire others to express themselves through one or the other medium.

PS- I have a tendency to blabber :P
PPS- Not a stalker, just curious! :D

eLmoNiv said...

Alas, fb is not the end-all and be-all Mr.Stalker, sir :P

Arthur Dent said...

Keep up with the writing missy, and maybe I'll become a stalker. At least on your blog :P